Read this file first.


Only those segments that start with a header that is a person's name are part of the actual story; the rest are just editorial notes. Some of these notes accompanied early fragments in a writing class that I endured the spring of '95. On those rare occasions where I seem to be addressing the reader, it is my former professor who was intended. Now a number of people are reading this, so any reference to the reader is general rather than personal.
After the editorial is clipped out, I would like to believe that the chapters would make sense regardless of what order they were read in. As it stands, I think my intentions regarding where I want this to go will be clearest if it is read in this order:

| EXPLAIN 1 | MARIE 1 | LARS 1 | GEERTJE 1 | LARS 2 |
FRANK 1, | DOC 1 | EXPLAIN 2 | MARIE 2 | EXPLAIN 3 |
FRANK 2 | MARIE 3 | ARTINTRO | MARIE 4 |


I've thought about titles very little. Maybe: Telemetry, or Avatar, or ... the Horse You Rode in on, or Through the I's of Others . . . .

I'm open to suggestions.

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